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[Benjamin (Demo)]

Just a few suggestions.

Make the sound effects lower than the volume of the actual music, wall jumping just interrupts and it feels awkward.

Since the art style for the game is pixel art, I would strongly recommend MortMort, he's really helpful and has a handful of tutorials to help you.

I feel like a tutorial at the beginning would be better and text below the start screen saying "Press To Enter" or something, because I was a bit confused at first.

Overall, it's slightly better than most games here, good platforming and more.
3.5/5.

KilvenDeneras responds:

Hey,

Thank you for the feedback! The visuals and sfx are definitely things we are working to better ourselves with. We should start to have better ideas of how to design and implement these elements as we continue though.

I really appreciate the reference to MortMort, by the way. We'll be sure to check out his channel, it looks extremely helpful!

-KilvenDeneras

[Big ICE Tower Tiny Square]

I played the original on Steam and I've sen Vsauce mention it on D.O.N.G.

I have to say that the game flows really well and It's a great game to play when you have so much free time that you get confused with what to do.

4.5/5.

[33]

A moose with a noose.

That's all I can say.

[Bread With Jam]

I'll just write down the pros and cons of this game.

PROS:

Decent platforming and it's something to play when you're bored.
Background art isn't perfect, but still okay.

CONS:

Controls are as awkward as Getting Over It With Bennet Foddy and I would've made quick attack right shift.
Random high jumps that can take you over the trees.
Character art is bad.

3/5.

Java-N responds:

Thanks for your feedback :) I have made some improvements in the game, feel free to try it again, I hope this time you enjoy it more, thanks

[POK3D - be social]

A fast-paced game with an awesome concept and practically everything you want in a game.

[No Name]

The start screen took too long to load.
The controls always hit or miss, and I have to spam the arrow keys to actually move forward instead of holding.
Everything is just distorted stock images with nothing to them.
I honestly thought the game crashed when the delay to the next level happened.

If you stand on a rat for a while, first time the death animation plays you won't respawn, you only respawn when you jump off of it.
There's this snake in the level when keys are introduced who's covered up by the terrain, and when he's covered up and jump, you'll die.

This. (go to https://goo.gl/th33GM for the pic)

Why don't mice have animations?
Why does this game make me want to vomit?

I just can't review it anymore.

Goodbye.

[back in my day]

I can't complete the game because you can fall through one of the clouds.

[JOE 1]

This is kind of like Unfair Mario.

You have to remember the do's and don'ts.

This game should also be rated T for all of the violence and bloodshed.

3/5.

[Story of a Cube]

You really nailed the feels on this one.

The music is so simple, with a great piano.

The GUI is so simple. And there's nothing complicated about it.

Which really gives feels.

The gameplay is good too. A nice puzzle game.

It was fun to play, kept me occupied.

4/5.

[Brick BreakThrough]

I mean, the GUI is really mediocre.

I want something clean like your logo or the loading screen.

I honestly would just want a remaster instead of a spinoff, because it looks like you had an idea but didn't know how to execute it very well.

I also don't like the skills feature, if you're making a game and want to add certain skills, the game should at least have some challenge, which Breakout doesn't.

All Breakout has is good gameplay.

These textures, I would get rid of them, they are in different styles that just look akward.

Make them simple, like a pixel art.

It almost crashed on my first hit.

Basically, this game is REALLY bad.

There's barely anything I like about it.

In fact, I DON'T LIKE ANYTHING ABOUT IT.

I'm sorry, I really hope you improve, but this? It's just plain bad.

0.5/5.